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Here, I started off to explore the thoughts of an old man, and it turned into something more personal. Not that this story is biographical - but it includes some of my delayed grieving that, for complicated family reasons, I was unable to complete when my father died.
- David


       I know I get confused sometimes.
       She gets that look, part exasperation, part love, and part sadness, and then I know I've said something silly. She tucks the rug round my legs. She kisses my cheek briskly, a butterfly touch on my bristly cheek, and pats my shoulders.
       'You all right now Dad?'
       I smile and nod, my head feeling wobbly on my neck. 'OK, lass,' I say, my chest full of a heavy love that I can't express.
       She hugs me and I put my arms round her shoulders. I feel the softness of a grown woman's shoulders, strong and rounded. For a moment I am confused again. Can't be my little Penny.
       'Penny?' I say.
       'Yes Dad?' She looks at me expectantly but she's already answered my question.
       So I say nothing. She waits a moment then drops another quick kiss onto my head and whisks away about her busy life.
       The scent of her lingers, the scent of the summer hay in the field behind the cow byre.
       'Eileen?' I whisper.
       The grass is scratching my bare chest and the cow parsley is nodding its shadow across my face and I hear Eileen's soft giggle beside me. Something is tickling my nose. I twitch my nose like a rabbit, wake up properly and turn and watch her watching me. She has a long stem of feathery grass in her hand.
       'Come on ya great lunk,' she murmurs, 'let's do it again quick. Else my Mum'll call me in for tea 'n we won't have time.'
       She leans towards me and puts her hands onto my chest and kisses me. Then of course I grab her and roll on top of her and start kissing her in earnest. Her soft warm body underneath me and the scent of the hay and the sun on my back. I push open her blouse and start kissing her nipples. She wriggles beneath me and hitches up her skirt again to let me in.
       'All right Dad? I've brought you a cuppa tea.'
       Images swirl around me.
       'All right, little Penny,' I manage to say, taking the cup and saucer in my hands. How old and gnarled they look, my hands, and how they shake. I control them and rest my arms on my knees. The sun in the sitting room has jumped. A moment ago it was only just reaching the big armchair. Now it was half way along the sofa. I don't say anything.
       I try to sit up straighter in my wooden chair with the arms.
       I like this chair best. It's firm and upright and doesn't smother me like the big soft chairs. Penny is moving around the small room like a vigorous whirlwind, dusting things and moving things. I like watching her.
       'Come on then Dad, let's get you sorted.'
       The sun in the room has jumped again and now it's red as well as gold.
       She reaches under my arms and lifts. I lean forward and push my feet downwards against the floor and press my hands onto the arms of the chair. My body lifts and then pauses at the reach of my arms. I let go of the supporting wood. Slowly I lever myself upright, feeling a brief wave of dizziness that I ignore. I know how to deal with that now.
       Slowly I walk towards the stairs, Penny's arm helping me keep my balance.
       The deck is heaving under my feet. It is black dark. The wind is jerking and buffeting and hitting me with the flying spray. The noise is smashing at my brain - the noise of the sea and the gale-force wind and the deck fittings clattering and the big twin diesel engines and the German shelling. It's hard to keep a clear head, and a clear head is vital if we're going to survive. I hold on tight to the steel stanchion and fight my way up against wind and spray.
       A bigger wave smashes over me and I crouch, ducking my head and letting it wash across my waterproofs. A gobbet of water lands inside my hood and I taste salt and feel the cold trickling inside my clothes.
       There is a blast of light and the ship jolts and shudders deep underneath. Another hit. They are still shelling us even though we can't answer back now. All we can do is run. I see things flying past me. I notice a piece of wooden decking and what looks like someone's sea boot with something sticking out of it.
       Then I am bending over someone.
       I start to lift him up but he starts coughing blood, big black gouts coming out of his mouth and mingling with the spray and being washed away.
       I lower him gently and he holds onto me. He is looking at me but I know he can't see. I try to comfort him with my arms and voice, holding him close, saying baby words, I don't know what, but he is sliding away from me too fast. I support his head as it lolls back, rocked by the motion of the ship.
       There is water swirling over my feet and it's time to move.
       'OK Dad?'
       We are at the stairs. Penny puts my hands onto the stair rail and steps behind me. I wonder, as usual, what would happen if I did fall. She is such a little thing I think I'd just knock her down the stairs too, but she likes to do it anyway.
       I lift my right foot onto the lower step. Leaning forwards and pushing up on the banister I straighten my leg. I grunt and lift the left foot.
       I used to be strong. I was strong in the Navy.
       'I do love a Navy man.' I heard the soft hoarse whisper in my ear from the shadowed darkness beside me. It wasn't my Eileen's voice, but I was past caring. Two years is a long time.
       I hunched against her, this woman of need, pressing her back against the wall. A Wren, she was Navy too. Probably married too, I hadn't asked. It was dark enough here in the alley. No streetlights. It'd have to do. I felt her hand feeling for my fly while her other arm pulled my shoulders close to her. I could smell the gin on her breath. My hands slid under the front of her navy skirt feeling the crispness of the stockings, then warm moist flesh and suspenders. My hands reached inside her knickers.
       'Will you be OK now Dad?' The voice is anxious. We were up the stairs and at the bathroom door. 'I can stay with you if you like.'
       'I'm all right,' I say, fighting off the shadows, 'best on my own love.'
       This is routine and I manage perfectly. I finish and open the bathroom door. Sometimes there have been accidents, but she's very good is Penny.
       She doesn't go on and on about things like my mother.
       I turn back towards the stairs.
       A cluttered back yard with my broken wooden cart turned upside down on the grass, undergoing vital repairs. My legs in long-short grey school trousers sticking out in front of me, grey socks and school sandals. Dad's garden shed that always smells of tar, door open and tools taken out and put ready beside me. I look at the ground, not listening to Mum's shrill voice going on and on and on as I sit, not knowing what else to say, the broken chisel on the concrete step, laid out like evidence.
       'I'll pay for it out of my pocket money,' I say yet again, 'I'm sorry, Mum. It was an accident. I'll tell Dad and buy him a new one. I promise.' But I know from experience that nothing would stop the flood once she got started. I just had to sit and wait it out, like a long grey week of cold drizzle.
       I stumbled and had to stop myself from falling. The rug had got rucked up again and caught my foot.
       Penny was different. She didn't mind if I got things wrong, though sometimes she looked sad. I try not to be a nuisance to her. She always has been a good girl, even when she was little. I can hear her singing downstairs in the kitchen.
       Little Penny is skipping in the garden and singing and laughing and I feel happiness well through me, making me relaxed and warm and good. The sun will soon be behind the tall oak in the next-door garden, but there's still a bit more sun left in the afternoon.
       Eileen is making tea in the kitchen behind me. I can hear the clatter of the teacups and the whistle of the kettle, rising and then dying away as she lifts if off the gas.
       I'm sitting in the deckchair on the lawn in my braces, sleeves rolled up, the newspaper on my knee. The lawnmower is on the path waiting to be cleaned and put away until next week. Eileen's empty deckchair is beside me, with her glasses and her bits of knitting.
       Penny is singing something as she skips, her rope swinging over and under making an almost invisible magic container inside which she is hopping and panting and laughing, while I watch and count her skips.
       'A hundred,' I call out to her in shared triumph.
       'What?' Penny's voice called up from the kitchen. 'You finished Dad? I'll come and help you get to bed shall I?'
       Obediently I stop and swivel on my feet and start back the way I had come, steadying myself with my hand against the wall, past the bathroom to my small bedroom at the back. This had been Penny's room when she was little. Now she and her Tom sleep in the big bedroom at the front and I sleep in the back. Tom and she haven't any children. I don't know why, but they seem happy together and I can tell by the light in Tom's eye that there's no problem on that front. There's time yet.
       A sharp hurt pierced my chest and made me stop short, one hand to my chest.
       Eileen.
       I didn't need the big bedroom now. Eileen couldn't share my bed any more. No more her delicious giggle, and her shiver when she stripped off her dress, part cold, part excitement as I gazed at her with my heart in my eyes as she used to say.
       They wouldn't let me see her properly. The car had ripped her up too much, they said. All I could see was her little cold face peeping out from under the thin sheet. Too cold. I longed to find a nice warm blanket to put over her, one of the big red ones from the hospital. Surely they could do that for her. When I kissed her lips they were cold, like a joint of meat sitting on the draining board ready to be cooked. No response. Tears splashed onto her face and started trickling into her hair and I had to find my handkerchief to wipe them away, but more kept coming until they took me away.
       My hands were on the door of the little bedroom.
       It was dark in the passage. I'd always wondered if I could put in a small window in the wall at the end, but I never had. I steadied myself against the worn white paint of the doorframe and turned the round china knob with the pink roses with my other hand. It clicked and I pushed the door open.
       I walked the few paces to the bed unsupported, and twisted quickly to sit with a bump on the mattress. Penny had turned the covers down ready for me and my pyjamas were folded neatly beside me.
       Penny had only been thirteen when Eileen was killed.
       Somehow we had supported each other, and now she was married and looked after me. Tom was a good man. He worked in the car factory the other side of town, bringing in good pay. Not one to get drunk or do anything impulsive.
       Like me really, but dark haired and not such a big man.
       'Here you are Dad.'
       The door opens and Penny comes in with my glass of water and the stuff for my teeth.
       She helps me change into my pyjamas. I don't mind her doing that now. I had resisted until the time I had that fall. After that I decided she'd be happier if I let her.
       'There now, all comfy?'
       I am in my pyjamas and sitting up in bed.
       'I've got some news.' Her face was all shiny and excited.
       I smile at her, wanting her to be happy.
       'Dad, I think I'm going to have a baby. Tom's ever so pleased.'
       I put out my arms and she hugs me. Another generation started. I feel the stupid tears in my eyes. The pain is starting in my chest again but I don't tell her that. I pat her back with both my hands, smiling over her shoulder, hoping she will understand.
       'Night now Dad,' she said at last releasing herself. 'Sleep well.'
       'Night Penny.'
       The light goes out and I hear the door click shut behind her.
       I lie back and gaze at the ceiling. My chest hurts some more and I can hear the darkness. The darkness is roaring at me, louder and louder, sweeping up like a great tide engulfing a stony beach. My chest and arm feel numb.
       I turn in the narrow bed and reach out my arms.
       'It's OK now,' I say reaching out my arms to Eileen. 'She's going to be OK now.
       'It's time. I'm coming now love.'
       I hear her delicious giggle beside me. 'Come on then ya great lunk,' she whispers and I feel her hands reaching out for me, 'one more time.'        
       
   

 

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