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Wednesday 17th July 2002


       Muhammad Malouf felt the finger of God touch his right foot.
       It was a vast gentle touch, warm but strong like the tip of a great finger. He hadn't known it, but now he knew what God's touch felt like, and tears of gratitude were in his eyes.
       Looking up, he saw that the queue had moved on.
       He walked forward four shuffling steps. God was with him. God even directed him in little things such as this. Gently reminding him to close up the line before somebody slipped past him and so delayed God's work. He felt humbled and exalted to be chosen as God's holy instrument.
       God had first come to him, he thought, just four nights ago, shortly after midnight. Before that he'd known nothing, he'd been as a child.
       First he had felt the intimate shocking touch in his hands and in his feet, waking him from his sleep. In the darkness he felt it, a touch, a brushing. It was clear and unexplainable so that his scalp prickled with fear. "Who's there?" he called out. Then that first glow of fulfilment. Be not afraid it seemed to soothe him, unvoiced, a flood of pure feeling, be not afraid - rich reward - wonderment.
       Again the next night, the same thing happened. God came to him and touched him, but said nothing.
       Then again on the third night, and he called out in fear "What do you want of me?" but again there was no answer. What was God asking of him? He'd even been worried that he was ill in the mind with some sickness. He smiled to himself now at this memory.
       The dogs had barked outside each night, he remembered, and wouldn't be hushed. His father had said it was intruders, two men, he'd seen them. But now Muhammad knew better. The dogs hadn't barked at the intruders, they'd barked fearing the immanent presence of God.
       The next day the two travelling holy men, the elders, had come to him. They'd been told by God to come and find him - him, Muhammad Malouf, and nobody else. To instruct him in the task that God had set for him.
       He'd been chosen.
       They had walked into his father's farm, striding serenely out of the dawn over the dry ground, seeming to materialise from out of the very swirls of morning mist as the rising sun sucked in the night time dew. They called to him. When he heard them coming towards him, and that they spoke his name, his heart opened to them as when God had spoken in the night. He felt a flood of love and happiness at the sight of them.
       They had come to him just yesterday, no longer ago than that, and yet his world was transformed.
       They seemed to know that God was speaking to him. They knew that God had spoken to him each night for the previous three nights. They had understood how that indescribable glow of warmth and happiness had flooded without reason through his heart and mind. They knew when it happened to him. Because of this, he loved them - beyond his brothers, beyond his father - he loved them.
       They had instructed him in what God required of him.
       
ooOoo


       Yesterday he had walked south, from Al Arroub, and this morning he was waiting with a hundred others in the early morning crowd at the military checkpoint to enter the settlement area.
       He could see the barbed wire and concrete, and two IDF soldiers looking out at the waiting crowd with hard eyes, their rifles ready. He gazed at one helmeted head with the dark sunglasses.
       I'm not a fool, he thought. I'm 14 years old and a man, and I was educated in the big UNWRA School near Al Arroub. I know that God has put a soul into the body of that soldier too. But all the same, if he finds the bomb he must die. God is not with him, and he must die.
       But God will guide me. I have to go to the centre of the town, into the crowded shops, before I die and enter paradise. The wise elders explained this to me and told me the route I was to take, as they strapped the explosives to my body. High on my chest, fixed to my back at my waist and low in my loins so that they don't make a bulge. That way they will remain hidden.
       He felt hot under his clothes, however, and he moved heavily.
       He remembered how lovingly they had adjusting one charge behind his neck, just under his skull. He was happy to know it. He did not want to live on paralysed or maimed if something went wrong. They had explained this. This way he was either alive, or he was dead - nothing in between.
       He walked forward again, his right hand hovering near his chest where the two exposed wires lay, just under his shirt. Just one touch, he thought with amazement, just one touch and the world explodes, and I die. God is Great.
       He was at the barrier now.
       Holding his head low he handed his papers into the grasp of the IDF guard.
       "Muhammad Malouf", he mumbled.
       "Why do you go into the town?"
       "To buy supplies. My father needs seeds and fresh vegetables."
       "But you can buy those at", he paused to glance at the papers in his hand, "at any of the villages around Al Arroub. That's where you come from isn't it?"
       "My father told me to go to the town."
       "Go and buy your seeds and vegetables at Al Arroub."
       "My father told me to go to the town."
       The soldier grunted a remark about ignorant peasants under his breath, and checked Muhammad's bag. Impatiently he waved him through.
       Muhammad had not been anxious that the soldier might find the explosives.
       He knew God was guiding him and he submitted to the will of God. If God had decreed that it was this soldier who was to die with him, so be it.
       He walked through the barrier.
       Kiryat Arba, the first renewed Jewish community in Judea and Samaria, home to more than 6,000 Jews, and an occupied Israeli fortress deep in enemy territory.
       
ooOoo


       Two men followed Muhammad through the checkpoint.
       They were dressed and looked like Palestinians, and Muhammad would have recognised them as the two wise elders who had armed him for God's task.
       He would have been surprised to hear them talking now.
       Instead of the strangely accented Arabic that Muhammad had noticed and been unable to place, they were talking American English, quietly and professionally.
       America? That hated bullying power behind the Israeli oppressors?
       But they took care to stay well back so that he wouldn't see them.
       "OK. He's on track."
       "Will he do it himself?" wondered the taller of the two men.
       The other man shrugged indifferently. "You have the abort key." Without thinking he moved his hand on the small device hidden in his clothing, and touched the 'reward' key lightly. In the distance he saw Muhammad's shoulders straighten and his chin go up as he strode on with renewed vigour.
       One click, he thought. It had been that easy to make the boy love them. For three nights in a row they had 'rewarded' him, mimicking the bible story of the boy Samuel. Then, when they approached him out of the mist the next morning, as they called out his name, he had clicked the reward key one more time and the boy had loved and trusted them.
       "Yes, but it's interesting to see", the tall man persisted. "Can he really bring himself to die, to touch the wires together, or will we have to do it for him?"
       The other man shrugged again, not interested in, or possibly not comfortable with this line of speculation.
       There were two separate devices, they both knew.
       The shorter man had the guidance device, a neat palm-held fixed frequency radio transmitter with 16 touch buttons allowing him to select any of the 16 places on Muhammad's body that he could stimulate, plus the 'reward' button that gave the pleasure.
       The taller man carried the abort device. This was a separate radio transmitter with a firing button and a safety switch. With that he could fire the detonators on Muhammad's body independently of Muhammad. This was provided partly as a back up in case the carrier's nerve failed at the last moment, but mainly in case they needed to abort the mission and destroy the evidence. The charge under the boy's skull would blast upwards, smashing his skull and anything in it to unrecognisable pulp and debris.
       They followed quietly, keeping their distance at about 200 yards, well within transmitter range but well out of the way.
       
ooOoo


       As the wise men had instructed him, Muhammad had gone first through the residential area south of Harsina, cutting south of west through the complex of smaller streets. Rich houses they seemed to his eyes, houses of the hated enemy, neat and clean. They were painted in pretty pastel colours and had neat lawns and flowers. He thought of his village. Concrete piled on concrete, house piled on house, and rubbish piled in the narrow alleys.
       The sun was hot on his forehead and he felt strong. A moment ago he had felt again the blessing, flooding through his soul, and he'd straightened his back and lengthened his stride, eager to do God's will. He thought how his father would be proud of him, and how his mother would weep but be happy, knowing he was in paradise.
       God was with him. The dust smelt of holy fire and cinnamon, and he strode past the small neat houses of the enemy disdainfully.
       The sun shone and it was hot, with a fierce dry heat.
       He reached the shopping centre and mingled with the crowds, heading for the big expensive department store as he'd been told. It would be crowded with the enemy at this time, mostly women and children, they had told him. It was a fitting place to do God's work.
       He paused.
       There was an armed IDF soldier standing at the door watching the people going in. He waited. He was confident and patient. God would provide.
       He saw a larger group of women approaching the store, talking together and laughing. One held a toddler in her arms who was really big enough to walk. Would these do?
       Yes, he'd known it was to be this group. Just as the group passed him, he felt the soft tap-tap on his shoulder - the warm friendly touch of God.
       Ducking his head slightly, he slipped in amongst the women and skipped through the door. He was inside the fortress of the invading enemy - a spy and an avenger. Now to find the biggest group so as to do the most killing, quickly before anyone found him.
       He felt again the warm guiding touch, in his side this time, and he threaded his way through the strolling crowds. Quickly, quickly. He was guided to a big group watching something and some person talking. Telling them something. To buy something.
       People turned and stared at him as he thrust his way into the thickest part of the crowd, and he heard shouts behind him.
       They were afraid. He could sense it. He didn't fit in. He was a ragged boy amongst smartly dressed suburbia. He was dangerous.
       Deep in the densest part, close up against a fat woman holding her baby, he cried out aloud. Straightening himself high at last, he shouted at the top of his voice.
       He did not need the warm touch on his right hand.
       Yes, God, I'm coming.
       I'm coming now.
       He reached into his clothes at his chest and grasped the two pieces of wire.
       As he clamped them together with his fingers, the world was suddenly a crash of cymbals and piercing flame of glory. The reward flooded through him in burning ecstasy. Oh God, I come...
       

 

 

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